Untitled Tanka for - Haiku: One Deep Breath
Week 85, Theme: A Childhood Story
paper snowflakes
that Daddy taped at every
windowpane...
the twinkling hush beyond
drifting whitely through time
DW Bender
Janauary 18, 2008
untitled tanka
Friday, January 18, 2008
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3 comments:
Glad you found ODB. This is a beautiful tanka.
hello debi! your tanka is so peaceful, like a window to the past.
thank you very much for visiting & providing an extremely helpful critique. i welcome it & appreciate your wisdom, as everything i do is an untrained creative outlet. your visit also allows me the joy of exploring your work...
please stop by anytime & feel free to offer advice! my gratitude to you!
Thank you, Roswilla and qualcosa di bello (Deb?).
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