Friday, January 18, 2008

Tanka, January 18, 2008 (HODB Theme: A Childhood Story)


Untitled Tanka
for - Haiku: One Deep Breath
Week 85, Theme: A Childhood Story


paper snowflakes
that Daddy taped at every
windowpane...
the twinkling hush beyond
drifting whitely through time


DW Bender
Janauary 18, 2008
untitled tanka

3 comments:

Roswila said...

Glad you found ODB. This is a beautiful tanka.

qualcosa di bello said...

hello debi! your tanka is so peaceful, like a window to the past.

thank you very much for visiting & providing an extremely helpful critique. i welcome it & appreciate your wisdom, as everything i do is an untrained creative outlet. your visit also allows me the joy of exploring your work...

please stop by anytime & feel free to offer advice! my gratitude to you!

Debi Bender said...

Thank you, Roswilla and qualcosa di bello (Deb?).