Friday, January 18, 2008

Tanka, January 18, 2008 (HODB Theme: A Childhood Story)

Untitled Tanka
for - Haiku: One Deep Breath
Week 85, Theme: A Childhood Story

paper snowflakes
that Daddy taped at every
the twinkling hush beyond
drifting whitely through time

DW Bender
Janauary 18, 2008
untitled tanka


Roswila said...

Glad you found ODB. This is a beautiful tanka.

qualcosa di bello said...

hello debi! your tanka is so peaceful, like a window to the past.

thank you very much for visiting & providing an extremely helpful critique. i welcome it & appreciate your wisdom, as everything i do is an untrained creative outlet. your visit also allows me the joy of exploring your work...

please stop by anytime & feel free to offer advice! my gratitude to you!

Debi Bender said...

Thank you, Roswilla and qualcosa di bello (Deb?).