Saturday, March 15, 2008

Two Untitled Tanka (One collaborative)

seeing again
the beauty of tear drops
against dew drops
the mosses, catching them,
reveal a universe

untitled tanka
Susumu Takiguchi, UK: /st
DW Bender, USA: /db
January 4-5, 2007

without announcement
a spell of winter rain falls
into loneliness...
how my feet keep on slipping
over clouds dropped by the sky

DW Bender
Janauary 18, 2007
untitled tanka

1 comment:

qualcosa di bello said...

'feet slipping over clouds dropped by the sky' is a spectacular metaphor...all are lovely in this post!